Malik Madison, an 18 year old pill popping teenager, joins the army. His goal? To follow in his deceased father’s footsteps, and to turn his life around.
The concept sounds awesome! I like the idea and it sounds fun to read. Your logline was also very creative and personally, I wouldn't want to change it. It gives you a plot, a character, and many questions that I'm itching to get answered. Great!
its really good. i like how you added a question into it. it makes you wonder what happens in the story
ReplyDeleteBad-Ass Story line here guys, I hope your antagonist is a tight-wad no BS commanding officer!
ReplyDeleteNo hes not dont worry the antagonist is quite the interesting man =D
DeleteThe concept sounds awesome! I like the idea and it sounds fun to read. Your logline was also very creative and personally, I wouldn't want to change it. It gives you a plot, a character, and many questions that I'm itching to get answered. Great!
ReplyDeleteWhoa man! this is great! Like it was written by a genius! I've never seen a plot like this before! :O
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